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Hi,

Wow! My fav villian from LotR-Silmarillion... Melkor is free? He saw thght ght of the Silmaril and followed it back to Earendil's ship and from there to Endor?
I need more!
-K-

I like this fic, really. I hope it's not taking too long for you to update.
but, uhm, where's the rape?

OOOHH!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER!!! Pleasepleaseplease let the twins be alright! this was a wicked good updated! makes me bouncy. ::bounce bounce::

yaaay fic!
perdowen

Hi,

Don't hurt the twins! please!

:(

Poor Erestor! That was some dificult reading. But aside from that, really great fic!
The twins are absolutely adorable. (Elladan held out the horse for him. “I thought you might be lonely so, I brought you something to keep you company.” )
Especially Elladan's 'thing' for Erestor. Very fabulous, pleasepleaseplease continue!!!

Poor Elladan seeing his tutor hurt.Poor Erestor!!!

Loved it! What happens next? Does Erestor die? Is the attack gonna go well?

very good. for the next few chapters, can you space the paragraphs out a bit more? it's hard to read such a huge chunk of text. it you put spaces in between the paragraphs it gives your ey bit bit of a break. very interesting plotline, just check your spelling and grammar and stuff. misspelled words and grammar flubs just take away from an otherwise wonderful story.

oh and it all seems a little rushed. add some detail to the story; character feelings, scene descriptions, etc. other than that, very good.

poor erestor... mean, horrible morcorban. evil evil horrid person!

keep writing!

Poor Erestor!Somebody save him already!!!Please!!!

:D