rate_review Reviews

I can't decide if I love this or you more....

*thinks*

Love you more. But still.... *sighs*

'He breathes the name, eyes half-closed in a stunning imitation of reverence.'

I like that you're not just talking about poetry, you're writing poetry. You're showing rather than telling. Which is very special. Another notch in the Talent bedpost for the LS group.

oooh!!! Like this lots. The dialogue........suddenly wondering how you spell dialogue, apologies if that aint it.........is excellent. You can feel the tension. One of my favourite parts of romance is the build-up.

Oi. Oi. Oi. So now I have a new band to go out and find stuff for. Thank you very much missy. B/c if Adam is ANYTHING like fic Adam, he is indeed a sexy bitch. This has amazing dialogue. I love that random, yet, perfectly directed conversation that's so hard to find in fics. The two of them just kind of melt together perfectly, it's incredibly sexy.

Then again, it is Craig we're talking about.

Corliamat - that is how you spell dialogue, but I know what you mean.. Some words never look right ~L~

Thanks... :) ~hug wan wanted to have the build-up... it makes the seks at the end that much more satisfying... ~grins~ And basically I'm in a super-sappy mood at the moment. :D


sissy-darling - Oh yes. I am certain Adam is a totally sexy bit-chah. How can he not be? Scruffy, wields a guitar, writes fantastic lyrics like "pushing forward and arching back, bring me closer to heart attack" ~growwwr~

Craig. Yes. Craig.


~pash~