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for Winnowing

by XxLadyGreyxX

person aimless
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very, very well written story. You described well the horrors of war and its effects on the spirit. I liked that you showed us a vulnerable side to Legolas and that the war scarred him deeply. Your description of his recovery from his depression was well thought out and brilliantly written. The final paragraphs brought a tear to my eyes. Bravo!
Peace,
Amy
person Nanamar
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is WOW!!! This story was so heart warming, and I loved it. Thanks so much for writing it. It was a rare treat to see a fic that takes place after the fellowship.
person Vi Janaway
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It is 10 a m on a bright, beautiful Saturday morning, and i can't stop the tears.
This story picked me up and shook me. Gentle, kind, poignant, strong, powerful.....
Ever faithful Legolas...on the last boat....no one to pipe him home....just the memories
on a last, soft, sweet breeze.
Thank you
Vi
person spiffy
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lovely work!
Thank you for your hard work. . .
You're welcome to write more for us, you know!
person gwil
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this story. It was both beautiful and moving. Despite the death at the end you managed to make it heart-warming. Thank you for posting and I'll be saddened to see it taken off of aff.net despite the rating.
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to add a thank you here for all of you that took the time to review Winnowing. It really means a lot to me. ;)
person Ash
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awe... That was a very sweet chapter. So when are you gonna write more? I love this story so much. ps sorry I took so long to review. The modem in my computer was blown and it took me a while before I could go into the city and get one. Write more soon please!
person Steph
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was about to go to bed, and I thought I'd check for a good story to read before I did. I'm glad too, because this is one of my favorites. I love Elrond/Legolas, and your story, being after the war, is original and lovely. I really appreciate the interaction between the two, and the gradual build of comfort they gain from eachother. I know you have a life, and can't stay glued to your computer, but please update soon! I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes.
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this very much, and hope you continue. Your charcterization of Elrond rings true, and I'm loving his and Legolas' interaction.
person Ash
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Awe .....! That was so sweet and sad I loved it! You almost had me crying, please write more very soon.