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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW - liked this
just wanted to say it's good! :D
just wanted to say it's good! :D
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Can't wait to read the others.
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is fucking incredible! Great dialogue, strong emotions. I so appreciate it when writers stick as close as possible to Tolkien's elegant languge. It's strange reading a story containing an elf who uses the words "don't", "can't", and "fuck". I absolutely love this. E-mail is above.
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October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like what you've writen. I've enjoyed the pairing. I hope you continue on with it! Maybe get into the whole duty vs love thing. ;) But I really enjoyed this and would like to see more!!
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August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The emotions in Chapter one were described very nicely. I can really relate because something nearly exactly like that happened to me.
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August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think Eldarion is portrayed as e very s and and caring young man. He and I have similar personalities. Hehe, I think he is very good for Legolas! "^_^"
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August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Big aw for Eldarion and Legolas! I know that this story has sort of a mellow and warmly subdued feeling to it, but I'm really hoping for even some luke warm jealousm Arm Aragorn.
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August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! Chapter four was almost poetic. The words and their meanings were not just slapped together with some crazy-glue. I actually understood them. Very well done.
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August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dang, now THAT was sad! Anger and jealousy aren't the same, but I guess it is better suited for this story, so I'm uber-happy!
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August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh! Sweet, sweet, SWEET! the ending was adorable and made you wish the new couple a happy life forever and ever. The blue-line thing was great. It was one of the fine points of the level of sensuality in the sexual context of this story that I especially loved...Doggit! I sound all soffistimicated, don't I?