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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HAHA! THAT WAS SOOOO FUCKING GOOD! BOTH CHAPTERS WERE HOT! HELL, IF I EVER HAD A TEACHER AS SEXY AS VIGGO....WHEW! I WOULD NEVER BE ABLE TO KEEP MY MIND ON WHAT THE CLASS WAS ABOUT! WOW. I HOPE THERE IS ANOTHER CHAPTER! THERE NEEDS TO BE!
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
He liked it more please
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July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the idehinehind this story but the way it's written makes it difficult to read. You need to proof read it and spellcheck it too. One spelling I picked up on was 'distinkt'. It should be 'distinct'. Also I noticed some typing errors with regards to the pronouns use use so it isn't always easy to ascertain who you are talking about! For example you miss the 'off off of 'her' sometimes and this means it reads 'he' which can be confusing. Proof reading should eliminate this problem. Sorry to criticise but I hope it was constructive as I like this story!
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey
I love this Story.
But I was wondering if you could do a favor for me
would you write a fanfiction revolving around ORLANDO
and a GIRL. Because all the fics I read have him being gay
and I dont c him like that.
So PLEASE, PLEASE. And if you do e-mail me please
I love this Story.
But I was wondering if you could do a favor for me
would you write a fanfiction revolving around ORLANDO
and a GIRL. Because all the fics I read have him being gay
and I dont c him like that.
So PLEASE, PLEASE. And if you do e-mail me please
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July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
me likes, very much!!! more soon!!
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June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story was posted before and there were three chapters. I really liked it then will the rest be reposted soon. I would be more specific but I do not want to ruin the story for others.