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for One pair of Red shoes: Missing

by StrangeMusic

person Tinuviel
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

Wow... I loved the ending!
Thank god!
I mean... you know...
wonderful, perfect nourishment for my mushy he ;) ;)

But what I really aore are your dialogs...
the really fascinate me!
great!

hug
Tinu
person Limey rð¦ r
schedule July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
maybe it helps that i am drunk reading this now. heh. no really its very sweet and all that. you had me worried.
person Tinuviel
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Gosh....
I mean....

poor Dom! This is so horrible... I mean I can't imagine what this will lead to and I'm dying to know!
Really it*'s completely intriguing!

hug
Tinu
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ehm. . .

WHAT?

I'd recommend *not* taking acid before writing fic. Just a thought.
person Tinuviel
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
this sounds extremely promising...
I mean... it's so scary but extremely great at the same time...
can't wait for an update!!!

hug
Tinu