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by Cheysuli

person ff
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well-written and rather heartbreaking. It would be nice to have a sequel so Legolas could get his "happily ever after."
person cerasi
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Such a sad story! Aragorn was OOC but I guess that's okay because it is fanfiction. Legolas was a but OOC also but I still liked it. I have a question... Did you get that last line from A song called "My Immortal" by Evanescence? I just kind of remembered that line and the story fits with the song if you look at it like that. WEll email me if you can! eraserasi
person Vermillion
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I could feel the tears pricking my eyes. Just like a man, doesn't know he's got perfection until it gets up and leaves. This was very well written and I'm so glad you didn't go full on het. I hope you plan on going a little further with this. It has so much potential. Alright, I just can't stand that Aragorn doesn't get his comeuppance.
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was depressing. Poor Legolas.
person Nina
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor legolas! Is this the end? i think that Aragorn should pay for what he has done.
person Kei
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I don't like this fic. It's awful...
person Triptych
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How lovely, I felt so sad for Legolas, Aragorn definately did not deserve him. Very well written but I still prefer slash. Legolas is made to be loved.
person Vuaryn
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
SOmething new, but well executed. Poor Legolas, who would have thought, that Aragorn would replaced him with a maid! Ditch that King and seek for another....*hint hint*

Cheysuli, I also need some beta help. Email me, if you are willing to help me out.
person laiqalasse
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
interesting concept. definitely a departure from the usual "Legolasthe the bit on the side" deal.

~~L~~
person laiqalasse
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
interesting concept. definitely a departure from the usual "Legolas is the bit on the side" deal.

~~L~~