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What a nice gift for the holidays to get another chapter, or is it two? Who is Onardodya? Could you do a small summary about her in the next chapter if she was mentioned before? She is mortal, but has elven ways. Is she long-lived like Aragorn? Another mystery with Celeborn and the vision of Galadriel weeping over an dead elf to wonder about. Update soon, please!

Don't remember who Mel's grandmother is, but she must be important if she is aiding Namo/Mandos. At least now, Mel is convinced about Elrond's love. Wonder what Celeborn meant by that warning. Did not expect to see another two chapter update so soon, but happy to see it!

Poor Mel, to still feel so insecure about himself and Elrond to attempt suicide. Good to see you back, especially with a two chapter update. Think it was good that Thranduil did come back to Imladris for a visit. It would always be in the back of Mel's mind and heart that he was just a substitute to Elrond. At least now, Mel will realize that he is the one that has Elrond's heart. Thranduil is such a kind and understanding elf in the way he talked to both Mel and Rumil.

Peniel, don't know how you are able to keep track of all of your stories and the sub-plots in each of them, but I'm glad you are able to. Such angst for Melpomean with Thranduil arriving. If it isn't his fear aboosinosing Elrond to Celebrian in Valinor, it's a previous lover resuming his place in Elrond's life. Nice bit with Erestor and Thrilmaldur. Happy to see your update!

Will try again to leave my review. Line was too busy to accept it last time. Enjoy your nice long chapters with lots of different scenes and Elves as always. Galadriel must have a Big secret to keep it from Celeborn. What a great solution for Erestor and his Lorien lover from Celeborn to switch back and forth between realms. Very understanding of the Lorien Lord and Lady.

Was confused why Elrohir thought the other room was too noisy? He was with Orophin talking and fell asleep rather quickly. What was so noisy? Can't remember if it was Orophin's room or whose room.

Good thing about Elvil maturing fifteen years in age. What agony to wait for his maturity with his strong feelings for Elladan if he was only twenty five. Hope to read more about Elvil's background. Still a little confused about it. Happy reunion for Glorfindel and Ecthelion, now that Ecthelion has regained his memories. Now Glorfindel won't be drowning his sorrows in liquor anymore. Always enjoy reading your nice long updates.

Hope the lembas helps Elvil out. Twenty five years is still a long time to wait for full maturity. Wonder if there is some magical spell that will help him to mature physically faster. Wow, Elrohir certainly did not waste time when he realized he returned Orophin's love. Happy for Orophin who had to suffer unrequited love all of those years for his close friend.

I read far more stories without chapter-by-chapter summaries. If you choose to do a summary,
just remember you don't have to summarize more than a short sentence or two.
Try this or not... Chapter 29...Melpomean's insecurities frustrate Elrond and Elrohir is determined to
play matchmaker. Its short and to the point. You can play around with it as you want.

The story is great. Keep going.
Teri

Great! Your novel is very interasting! (and Funny>_Please! Write faster than now! I watting next chapter!!

thank you for setting that straight maybe i did read it wrong but i remember it saying when you were focusing on erestor that he said his twin? it is confusing but i think i am starting tounderstand that now, thank yory mry much! your story is great continue!