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Oh, Erestor is just superb, isn't he? He has the measure of the twins indeed. Elrohir is learning quickly, and he certainly does appreciate his rewards. He'll enjoy his "punishment" later, I have no doubt, although I suspect Erestor might have a surprise for Elrohir yet.
Nor is Elladan's interest going unremarked, although again, I suspect once Elladan comes to crave being taken again, he might find a lesson waiting for him as well.
I do so love this story, I truly do! And I am growing extremely fond of Erestor. What a delicious elf he is! :D
Definitely, Taming the Twins has became my favourite fic.
Erestor is wicked but absolutely irresistible. And Elrohir, so in need of love! He melted my heart as much as he melted Erestor's.
I'm looking forward to more of this wicked, but sweet, tale! Thank you.
Okay, the experimental made-by-dwarves thing made me giggle. Somehow, I could see that one being a favorite in future, once Erestor gets the twins further along.
I will say, I did truly enjoy the way the twins had a chance to talk and restore the bond between them. It would be a sad thing if they lost that in this process. But Erestor is far too wise to let them lose that.
I'm curious, though, what Erestor is planning for Glorfindel's pleasure. Perhaps a bit of play with one of the twins?
All the joy of the season to you and yours!
Oh, Elrohir, such a bold thing he is. Bold, and foolish, but completely delicious. He dares a great deal, but he reveals far more than he thinks. His worry over Erestor preferring Elladan, that was quite heartbreaking, actually. He wants to be loved, this young elf, very much so, but he also wants the discipline Erestor offers.
Elladan is definitely made of sterner stuff. Despite his confusion over Elrohir's response to his punishment, I do think Elladan went into this with more awareness of what might happen. Elrohir just hasn't seen what Elladan faces yet.
This just gets better and better with each chapter. I simply adore Erestor, and I did NOT think I would say that, so thank you for changing my mind! :hugs:
Yes, do let the double fun begin!
Thanks for the regular updates starting again. I always love the stories where Erestor is a little bit evil. I'm interested to see where it goes from here now that the twins secret is out in the open!
And so the game truly begins! Oh, Erestor is masterful, isn't he? It gives me such lovely shivers.
I wonder which of the twins will find it harder to watch his brother? I'm going to say it's Elrohir who will have a harder time of it. Elladan did not find Elrohir's treatment all that distressing, but I think seeing Elladan lost to profound submission will affect Elrohir greatly. I imagine it will feel quite like he is losing his other half, since that is what they are, the sons of Elrond. They are halves of a whole.
And oh, the servants will gossip, I do believe. Such stories will be told in corners, and I think Elrohir will have trouble with that as well. Elladan seems made of sterner stuff, although he does not like being humiliated publicly any more than Elrohir would. Still, I think Elladan could handle it better.
So now I will wait and see what you have in store, and I know it will be as perfect and delectable as this chapter was! Thank you for a wonderful read, and a lovely treat! :D
::fans self furiously:: Oh, my goodness, let me go and open all the windows! It seems to be quite heated in here...
I have rarely seen anyone portray an exercise in sadism with such exquisite grace as you've done here. I am far from a masochist myself, but I would be lying if I said I wasn't a little jealous of Elrohhir, to be the subject of Erestor's attentions. Glorfindel says it best in the beginning of the chapter: “You are patient… or vicious. I am not sure which!” (And might I add, I adored the way Erestor can make even Glorfindel uneasy.)
Elrohir is very much on the edge, isn't he? He craves what Erestor can give, but I'm not sure he was prepared for the cost. Of course, after the very end of the chapter, I expect we'll find out exactly what the cost will be, since it looks like the twins will have to come clean.
Utterly perfect, and glorious, and delicious! I am in love!
Once again, an excellent written chapter. I have gone from hating Erestor (Prince in Training, chapter 17 ) to find him bewitching. He has mastery on manipulating the twins' mind. I am pretty sure I will enjoy their taming very much.
As I have said in my review on Prince in Training, I am happy to read that you will be posting new updates on both stories. They are wonderfull and don't deserve to remain unfinished. Thank you again, Pippychick! : )