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for The Teacher - Missing Scenes

by pip

person TAFKAB
schedule March 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I think you are turning ME into the lustful young thing. X-D The more I read of this, the lustier I get! I could almost decide I'm 20 again while I'm reading these. ;-) Seriously, this was so hot and good. I love how Elrond takes over moving Legolas.... that just makes me melt into a happy little puddle. Thranduil is such a gorgeous, naughty boy! And the way they tease and play just shows how much love they all have... and he damn well knows it even if Elrond wants to be a prude So beautiful, mmmmmmmmm.... thank you SO MUCH for this! It made my day.
person Anon
schedule March 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Pen maelui indeed. I'm fairly sure that applies to all of them equally, these gorgeous, wanton elves. Why is it the forbidden, in their hands, becomes entirely desirable and beguiling? I will confess, I'm looking forward to seeing Oropher join the fun. The resulting rightness will make Middle Earth implode, I think. :D
schedule March 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy now you've taken me down a path that probably should have been left unexplored. Daddy/son inc? Oh hell yeah! Now we need another scene with Elrond but I do believe Legolas should be the filling in the sandwich... CL
person Anon
schedule March 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ah, lovely! I can picture this so clearly and the way you've written it is utterly sublime. There is something very satisfying in this, as if it completes a circle that demanded completion (although I fear Lord Elrond would not quite agree). Things are in their proper place now. Thranduil and Legolas are simply delicious, and I will carry this feeling of satisfaction into the main story as well. Thank you, this was a treat indeed!
person the_CL
schedule March 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Okay I'm reviewing on my kindle because this just couldn't wait. OMG seriously who knew almost incest could be so hot!! I would so not be opposed to reading more scenes like this one. That is all. CL
person Anon
schedule March 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wicked! Wonderful, delicious, and very wicked indeed! Somehow, I think Elrond and the Mirkwood Three (I do like that!) have managed to find a way to make Valinor even more inviting. So. Very. Wicked.
person Anon
schedule March 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Always that delicate dance of trust, and Elrond knows both sides of it well. But truly, I think Legolas, young and new to these games, will one day surpass them all. And Elrond, ever the teacher, is still learning himself, despite all the long years of experience he has. So very beautifully told, and thank you!
person Anon
schedule March 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you! This was wicked, and lovely, and utterly delicious, and a perfect treat for a lovely, lazy Sunday. And what a glorious chapter to have dedicated to me. I'll be all happily shivery for the rest of the day now, and my dreams will be full of graceful, wicked elves and their shenanigans. ::purrs happily::
person TAFKAB
schedule March 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh I loved that chapter! I could just put it in a blender and then drink it. X-D The three together-- Thranduil, Elrond, Legolas-- so sexy-hot, so wrong, yet so right. *I love Elrond's outrage and his uncertainty-- is he lying to himself? Somehow I hope not. Wonderful! *sighs happily*