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for The Teacher - Missing Scenes

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person Anon
schedule May 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
For Wine and Wishes: Oh, thank you from the bottom of my dark heart! This was even better than I dared dream, and as delicious as I'd hoped. Thranduil is very, very good at jumping into things without thinking them through, at least as an elfling. But he is also luckier by far than he should be, and so are we, to be treated to this exquisite deflowering. You had me from the very first word, but this line: "He spoke as Thranduil had never dreamed to hear him, and his voice was like dark sin, rippling over him, making his body react to the intimacy of it." Luscious, just completely glorious. And the end was beyond perfect. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
schedule May 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you keep teasing us with this! I swear once day you will have to break down and actually write it. You could write it out and then have Thranduil wake up, that would get it out of your system (and maybe mine too!) You make me so sad for the poor young Thranduil, please? CL
person Anon
schedule May 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
For Crushed Such a perfect scene, this is. It has an elegance, almost a timeless feel to it, despite how deadly earnest Elrond and Thranduil are. I will admit, I find myself drawn to Thranduil's youthful eagerness, and like so many other young people, he falls prey to the folly of wishful thinking, as if wishes were enough to change reality. Elrond is made of sterner stuff, and won't let himself be drawn in, not even by this beautiful and adoring elfling. I can see how the seeds were planted, right then, and why Thranduil never relented in his desire to possess Elrond, and to be possessed by him. Lovely as ever!
schedule May 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm catching up on a few things since the couch has become my new best friend. I loved this. Though I felt bad for Tranquillity, I do think he handled the situation in the right way. Thranduil's story was so sweet and something I could see an infatuated teen writing (and posting in celeb fiction). If there are any strange words in this review they are courtesy of my phone's autocorrect. CL
schedule May 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Apparently Thranduil = Tranquillity. :P
person Anon
schedule May 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
For Transgression Ah, Elrond is a stern teacher indeed. But I can see how Thranduil would only seize on that stern aspect and incorporate it into his fantasies about Elrond. Still, an apple for the teacher? Cheeky, cheeky Thranduil... I do hope your Elrond muse will relent one day. I'd love to see that entire ficlet. Lovely as ever! Thank you! :D
person Anon
schedule May 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say, that glimpse of a very young Thranduil fantasizing over his beloved teacher is completely adorable. It's so innocent, and tender, and I wonder if Thranduil ever forgave Elrond for making him read that aloud, even if Elrond was his only audience. Thank you for sharing that, and I hope the muses forgive you! :D
schedule April 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This was the perfect bedtime story! I love how Elrond still has reservations about things when he's been with them all so many times before, but I suppose never all three at once. I can't wait for more of them all together. CL
person Anon
schedule April 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Elrond was absolutely made for this, for an eternity of such afternoons. Honestly, the Greenwood Three are just irresistible, and wicked, and delicious. There are always moments when I wonder if Elrond will last, but then I remember who trained him so well. But it's very true. Every day here was pleasant. Lovely, lovely elf porn...
schedule March 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I read this twice but I'm only leaving one review... Thank you, thank you, thank you! I'm so happy that this one was for me, it was perfect. The fact that it was just Thranduil's fantasy somehow made it even better and even in his fantasy, Elrond is still a bit prudish which made me snicker a little. I can't wait for more of these three together and now my imagination is running wild of thoughts of a foursome with Oropher. You make me wish I could write about naughty elves but I can't so I guess I'll just have to feed your lusty muse. CL