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for Gates Of Dawn

by Massanie

schedule January 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

after reading through all of it during the last few days, I must say, I'm terribly sorry to hear that this story won't be continued. While I can certainly understand the reasons I still think it was great writing with an extremely believable character development. I enjoyed reading it very much and would have loved to continue.
While I was a little dubious at first about Erestor being a seer, I must say you managed to pull it off nicely without slipping into the trap so many others do and making him too powerful/all knowing, which can be extremely irritating. Especially in a good story.
Anyway, thanks for putting in all the hard work, time and thought to produce this.
schedule November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just recently discovered these stories. I've found them to be well written and planned. I am sorry to see that there aren't many reviews for them, and I'm sorry to see that it'll be discontinued for now, however I understand and I look forward to the day when you come back to this. Please don't give up completely; this is too well thought out and written to be abandoned forever. I hope things go well for you in real life and I thank you for all that you've written thus far.

Keep up the good work.