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Another awesome chapter! I'm curious as to what Azof is actually doing when he is out and am still wondering if he is ever going to be able to be able to...express his desire for Jules properly. I think is is probably the best bedroom scene that you've done so far and I loved when Azof spoke a little bit about what his life was like before I know I'm really interested in hearing more about his past. Can't wait for the next chapter update soon!

I swear, every update from you is like a sip of water in a desert, equally desired and loved! Azof's and Jules' relationship is, while not conventional at all (which is good) so strangely sweet. I do hope that he does regain use of his, um, male faculties. And also, it brought a wee smile to my face when he brought her blackthorn, and not only because it was very orcishly adorable, and provides to me, apt symbolism of them both—the black, thorny, unlovable branches, and the delicate, white flowers; the whole beauty and the beast thing. Eh, might be that I read too much into it, do excuse me, but I love snooping around for symbolism and such, even if the author maybe didn't intend for it to be there—I blame my (brilliant) English professors! Also, I liked the reference to blackthorn because it was one of my favorite shrubs back when I lived in your relative neck 'o the woods, Sweden. There, it's called "slån" and I remember picking the berries, but we'd have to take them home and freeze them to remove their bitterness before they could be eaten. Anyways, that chapter brought forth a lovely little memento for me an addition of being a pleasurable read, as always. =)

Another wonderful chapter, Azof's desire to constantly be around Jules is adorable and I hope his ailment wont always be a problem for him. Please update soon.

Where were you?! I was having withdrawals from the wonderfulness that is this story! I was so happy when I checked & saw that you had added another chapter, made me all giddy :) On a serious note though, I really love how you describe the bedroom scenes. You put in so much detail but you don't make it raunchy or sound like a bad porno/romance novel, I feel as if a proper lady were ever to write a love story this would be how. Once again I can not wait to see what happens & learn more about the two of them, who knows maybe he'll show another hidden talent other then being able to cook tasty nomz.

I love the latest chapter. I like how the ending of Sauron affected them in more than just they are no longer under his control. I'm exited to see more so please update soon.

Oof, what a horrible revelation. I seriously felt awful for poor Azof (even though I was completely shocked by the previous chapter). Though, I imaging an orcish brain could think of all sorts of interesting things to do with a lady (besides eat her, of course) that I'm sure these two will work something out. And, who knows, maybe Jules will work a little magic on poor Azof.

Also, Jules! I love it :D It has a sort-of intimate ring to it, the way I imagine Azof saying it.

Looking forward to the next update! Your orc stories are so wonderful.

Another fantastic chapter! Though I feel so sorry for poor Azof, what ever will he do? Oh well even without a working wanker he should be able to please a lady. I'll be sure to look that up on google while keeping an eye on this story ;)

I love this story, sense finding it I've been trying to find more stories like it. Please update soon, I really want to know what happens to these wonderful characters.

Two updates close together... this just makes me a very happy orc-fancier, you know. Last chapter was exciting. Azof's behaving like a right nutcase though, isn't he? I am curious to the reason why, and well... MOAR ORC SEX.

There's really so few good orc stories around, yours being the exception. Everyone fancies them prissy elves. Blah... =D

I wonder how kindly Ray Winstone would take to being called orcish, but I'll admit, his character in that movie (tv show?) seems like a good comparison in this case.

I like Azof tremendously, though Julienne is taking quite a dangerous risk being alone in the countryside and letting an orc play peeping tom. She's fairly lucky that Azof is such a gentleman about it (or, at least, as gentlemanly as an orc will ever get). It's a strange mental back and forth she's playing with herself as well, but somehow completely believable. Really nicely done, though sometimes your asides of asides in the prose makes me a little dizzy.

Still, I am in awe of how your write Azof's speech pattern (obviously this comment is more relevant to the first two chapters). Every sentence he speaks must be mostly red squiggles, yet I understand him perfectly when I read it. That's a tricky bit of business and I'm always impressed when I see folks pull off a heavy accent like that in stories.

Oof. What a place to end a chapter! I find myself checking on this story every few weeks, just to see if an update had been made. I was so happy that it was, only to be left with a cliffhanger. :/ Still, life always takes precedent over fan fiction. As much as I would love to see quicker updates, your chapters are always so nicely done, and well worth the wait.