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by angstyelves

person ziggy
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this hugely. Looking forward to seeing how things pan out
person ziggy
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really good- love the twisty plot and the misunderstandings. You have a good style and its quite a nicely sexy little tale, you do the passion bit just I want a little bit more- doesnt have to be cliched or full blown. Just a bit more skin...I'll ask nicely!
Love
Ziggy
person ziggy
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A happy ending and nicely rounded off.
person Anon
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've only finished chapter 1 so far. (Gotta go to work in about 10 minutes). I'll be sure to keep reading as I need to break from what I do after I get home!

Which also means maybe, when I'm more awake, I can come up with something better for ya, than "I like it!". LOL