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Well, I'm really happy for once I got hooked on a fic that gets regularly updated! And it is so good. Poor Legolas, ever before being a slave he had horrible experiences. I'm getting even more curious about how this story will continue! Keep it up!

I just found your story...and I got instanly hooked! So please keep up with it! I can't wait for Legolas to meet his family again! And to a new perspective on his time in the fellowship and his children!

You always manage to get such fear and tension into your writing-no exception this time either.

As a;ways, nicely done with this third person pov of Legolas. I liked the idea of his leaving a gift. Very moving, and yes, you are succeeding in making him strng and not a silly girly creature with 'cerulean orbs' and 'alabaster skin' - I can't bear that either.

I think this chapter was lovely- very touching with Legolas speaking of his father, and all the fear and helplessness of his slavery. And of course Mel makes him particularly vulnerable but if anyone dares hurt her they might find the compliant slave they have grown used to, is still an elven warrior at heart, and a father. It's strange because I really don't like mpregs at all but this is done with a purpose and with the plot in mind.And it works so well and is so well written.

I do not really like mpregs so I had not read this before, but I have been cheating myself. You have written this so well- with just the right blend of action and description, not overloaded and the lingering sense of sadness is so deep. I like too, how you have distanced Legolas from his life by referring to him as Dafi or the elf or the slave- so it keeps it real. Looking forward to an update please.