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Very.excited.for.this.part.one.of.two!sorry.my.space.bar.doesnt.work..I.love.this.story.and.im.going.to.read.the.next.chapter.now!:)

LOVED.chap.25/it.makes.me.so.sad.that.dafi.cant.try.to.leave.with.rumil.and.his.brothers/i.hope.mel.gets.somewhere.safe.and.legolas.finds.a.way.home.after.retrieving.mel/i.hope.to.see.more.with.benain.such.as.saving.animals.orhealing.someone/maybe.he.can.magically.recognize.a.picture.of.his.adar/that.would.be.nice.haha:)

Sorry for not reviewing earlier! I've been very busy with the holidays and only just now managed to have some time to read all your updates... and they were wonderfull as always. You just keep thickening the plot! Danger to Mel, danger to Tadion... ever present danger to Legolas? God is their world dangerous! LOL But I like it how thing seem to be slowly coming together, and the attention you pay to se so-called side characters. I quite like Leralonde, for example (and his whole storyline). Well, Im leaving on summer holidays in a few days (Brazil, here I come!), so I think I won't be able to come back to read till february...but I promise I will update then! So please keep up the good work and happy new year!

Oh...I just saw the new chaapter (can't believe I was so busy I took so long). Do i have to know what tadion is talking about or is it some new mystery?...Maybe tomorrow when I'm more awake I'll remember some detail! And I liked the foreshadowing of Legolas/Dafi's dreams!

Another fabulous chapter, with a thickening plot, deftly handled emotions and light descriptions as always that never fail to imprint themselves firmly in my imagination.

Oh, Dafi's dream was just wrenching, as was his inability to find any comfort in Javad's concern. He's holding on by such a fine thread, and it really is painful to see his struggle. It's a tribute to you as a writer that you can weave such a tapestry of emotion!

As always, beautifully light and delicate touch dealing with these dark themes.

Just thought I'd let you know, I've been following your story since the beginning of Book II, really enjoying it. I think you've done a good job with the characterisations and the plot is original. Love the quick updates too - I don't think there is such a thing as updating too much ;) but it is nice to not have to wait months between updates. Longer chapters are always nice which is also happening. I even introduced my friend who does not read mpreg, to this story and she really enjoys it, so good work! :)

It's nice to have news of Leralonde... but a bit sad that he is still apart from Saelbeth (hope you fix up soon!LOL). You have all these interesting characters that I almost don't know which I want you to write about in the next chapter! Oh, and it is not possible to update too often!

There was such a bittersweet quality to this chapter. I'm not even sure we have the right word in English for how it made me feel... but any chapter that can so move the reader, well... well done!