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Yay!!!! I'm so happy you're back!!! Hope things are going more smoothly in your life and wish you the best :)

This story is amazing, can't wait till your next update <3

HAPPY EASTER! (if you know of this Holiday) An update wouldn't be better than chocolate eggs and bunnies.

Great chapter! I knew something really bad happened to Tadion but this almost made me cry. I still love the story of course and am intrigued by all the mysterious secrets. Can't wait for everything to be revealed!!! :)

this story is killing me...
please please please get Legolas home before we all go crazy
hanging for every chapter , not that we are addicts or any thing
love the story

That no good Anirion, how dare he play with Saelbeth's heart. But, naive Saelbeth for believing in him, I mean, I'm sure he could have gotten anyone he wanted maybe. Smh...that's ok! Let's hope things are all better now and Saelbeth doens't make the same mistakes twice.

Interesting! can you sent me the updates to my e-mai and facebook. Thanks!

I read this chapter a little while ago and I thought I should review because I know it makes people feel good :) I do have to say im sleepy and don't exactly remember this particular chapter but I have read this story about 6 times haha (from book I!). I know what's going on in general and it has me all types of excited!!! I check for updates everyday but I'm considering not coming for a month in the hopes that I can surprise myself with a couple of chapters at least ;) So please update when you have time and completed chapters! This story is my only reason for coming here. It's the best! :)

WOW! So much happened since tha last time I read... I don't know what to comment on! The stroy sure is moving forwards! As always, I love the different perspectives each chapter has and the development of the so-called secondary characters (I don't think they can be called that any longer). So, I'll just leave you with a "Good work!" and a "please keep it up!".

What a sweet yet sad scene between Legolas and Mel! Mel is just so adorable. I love how scandalized Legolas was at the prospect of Mel piercing her ears haha. I've gotten mine pierced a lot of times but I never keep them....haha. I can't wait to figure out if they ever make it to Mirkwood/Greenwood. I also can't wait for the next chapter and scenes with Benain! I think the children are my favorite. I do think there may have been a mistake in this chapter. You write a similar sentence twice, just changing the words haradrim and harawaith(?). I'm not sure if Legolas was supposed to be repeating himself twice but I think maybe you copied it and didnt delete one. If that wasn't the case then oops, but it does read a little strange. :) Love your story and will be awaiting updates!!!