rate_review Reviews

Nice story. I love the way you write the conversation, both of them sound really in-character. The sex scene was really well-written too, you did a great job with the wording. That particular scene was perfect in detailing but some other parts of the story was a little heavy on the details, certain descriptions seemed a bit repetitive. Other than that, great job!

Just as good as the other A/L story of yours, if not a little better! Well written and well portrayed and the smut was very nicely described, of course! Kudos! Oh, naughty Arwen, me like, hehe!

i love it Arwen was so devious the ending and the very beginning was funny, but the story itself was hot hot hot hot hot! you captured Legolas perfectly and Aragon was good. great story i loved it