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The three last chapters were awesome, I really liked them, the character interactions was too and everything was well written as always, of course! Especially the ones between Aragorn/Legolas, naturally, hehe!

Chapter ten was a mouthful though, I must confess, seriously that was pretty dark and heavy, very well described nonetheless, although it was pretty creepy, I mean, not only did Legolas have to get inside Dol Guldur, to locate and kill his mother, okay, so it was an act of mercy, but still, (wherein he got severely tortured and raped, but he also had to do that to fellow beings and such, his own mother was no exception, even though, it was against he’s will, all of it), I feel so sorry for him and well, Aragorn too!

Another thing about said chapter; it was a bit hard to read the entire thing in bold letters, but that was probably the formatting going awry, hmm, so never mind, I guess?!

I really enjoyed the explanation of Legolas father (why he would send his youngest son to that kind of horrid fate) and why Legolas decided to take on the task in the first place, in the following chapter, it was very nicely described and I also liked it when Gandalf showed up, those scenes between all three characters were pretty damn great and whatnot! And all of the stolen moments between Aragorn/Legolas in that particular chapter were really sweet as well, kudos!

Now I most anxious to find out what’s going to happen next, therefore please update soon…

The two last chapters were awesome, I really liked them, the character interactions was too and everything was well written as always, of course! I did, especially enjoy the scene in the beginning half of chapter seven, when Aragon/Legolas were arguing over whom should sit in the front on the horse, that was just so cute and funny, kudos for such a sweet scene!

And the rest of the story were amazingly described and captivating too, very thrilling. So it was a man of the Rohan who was the culprit behind it all, argh, I’m glad though, that the truth finally has been spoken and that Legolas is no longer a prisoner and so on.

More so, the smut at the end of chapter eight was very nicely describe, not to mention pretty damn steamy, (fans herself), laughs! Now I cannot wait to read more, and will therefore most anxiously await the next chapter, until then…

Heart-wrenching, spine-tingling, and powerful are all words that come to mind describing this chapter. Outstanding job! The way you wrote the telling of events made me read so fast to find out, that I skipped words prompting me to read several passages a second time. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story, please update once more when you have the inspiration and opportunity to do so.

The two last chapters were great, I really enjoyed them, the character interactions in them were equally awesome and everything was well written too, of course! Especially the interaction with Aragorn/Legolas, they're so cute together! More so, I also enjoyed their conversations with Selwyn, very nicely described, as well!

The smut in the dream sequence in the beginning of chapter five was very nicely describe, kudos! About that particular scene; was it a dream or did it happen?! And what will happen when they reach their final destination and what about the court hearing?! And what about Selwyn’s leering?! I’m so intrigued with this wonderful story of yours, I simply cannot wait to read more, therefore please update soon…

Great job! I especially liked the other men's reaction to Legolas presence and how you described it so well. As for the 'fantasy,' we all know what really happened ;). Thank you so much for continuing to update this wonderful story, please do it again when possible and inspired.

Outstanding job once more. The enchantment is the one of gazing upon beautiful things. Even today exceptionally beautiful people high above the normal standard of appearance get away with things, have eyes roving after them, and often can easily persuade others to do their bidding. I don't think it's genuine 'elvish enchantment' sort of thing. On a different note, I am absolutely loving the chemistry between Legolas and Aragorn, fantastic! Please update once more when you have the inspiration and opportunity to do so.

Excellent job! Thank you for updating this intriguing tale once more, please do so again when you have this inspiration and opportunity.

Fantastic! I loved the ending there, to get between friends indeed. Thank you for posting this so far, please do so again soon.

Another awesome story of yours, which I’ve come to really like, of course! The plot’s amazing and the character portrayal and interaction were too, naturally. Everything’s also very well written!

Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon…

This is an outstanding story. I desperately wish more was written. Update soon, mon ami.