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Excellent. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

I love this story!
Keep up with the good writing
Could add more spanking to it through.
I think since Lucious malfoy ghost remained behind.
I miss Draco,through. You should make him come back from the dead.
Please!
I love the fact there was some daddy items in the story.
Maybe Harry should his lovers-daddy
Please! Maybe you could make it happen

This is a wonderful story. I can't wait to read more. I was wondering about something though? How old is Harry? The reason I am asking is because you wrote that he might not take his OWLS. That would make him 15yrs. If he is 17yrs, then he should be taking his NEWTS.

Oh, Legolas better not do something stupid... or better yet, please say that he is, that way Harry could punish him in the most delicious of ways... with bondage's, gags, maybe whips or paddles? (Ah, wishful thinking *chuckles*)

Please update chapter 27 soon ^_^

Jan

A very good story that I truely enjoyed!!! I suggest you post this in the Harry Potter Crossovers!

Ah, still more questions than answers! Thanks for sharing, Pitt

Of course, you know I'm enjoying the the blending of the two worlds. But, I'm a greedy reader though and beg for more details. Please? Especially, for instance, you could have added more explanation about the Dreamstone and Dreamstone sickness, even more particularly, how did Haldir know about the Dreamstones if there was nothing in his world to equal it. Who told him? Who gave them to him? I have my guess, and I assume it is part of the plot. I'll keep my fingers silent and just WAR (wait and read) to see if I'm right. I guess I want more story, lol. Again, thank you for sharing.



I hope you don't take affront, but, I offer a few grammatical-type notes as well:

Madam Pomfrey had explained about the Dreamstone sickness and there was nothing in there [s/b their - the possessive form] world to equal it.

The nurse disapproved but Thranduil agreed[.] He trusted Elrond and knew ...

You must allow me into your link with him or the Dreamstone sickness will killed [s/b kill] you both.

Elrond sat back. "The Evening Star is Harry's possession[.]" [H]e looked at Thranduil.

"Can you track it?" [h]is mate asked.

"I can certainly try[,]" Elrond responded.

Before leaving the room[,] Elrond smiled at Madam Pomfrey. "Thank you for your forbearance[,] [L]ady." [H]e kissed her hand, quite stunning the lady in question.

In [s/b on - unless they are actually underground, or in a hole in the grounds] the grounds of Hogwarts[,] they found waiting for them ...

"We're coming with you[,]" Hermione came straight to the point.

..... anyone else seeing harry put a Veela bash-down on Glorfindel and Haldir for smelling too much like his mate so soon after bonding? Just wondering.

Nice work!

I really, really like this. SO glad I decided to go crossover perusing. Looking forward to the next update!

Oddly, I don't normally read crossovers, but couldn't resist a combination of my favorite fandom with my favorite elf. I'm enjoying the story. While Veela!Harry can be overdone generally, I like the elf element, particularly, Glorfindel and Lucius, strangely enough. Now, can you introduce Hagrid to Gimli? LOL -- joking, sort of.

You weave an interesting tale. Thanks for sharing. Pitt