rate_review Reviews

You have an excellent writing style, and I love the way you describe things. The only problem I see is in the story telling itself. Things happen too quickly. The elves open up about their worst fears and past troubles with little to no trouble at all. They also describe their stories as if they were narrating them, rather than speaking from a personal perspective. I would say that you need to draw the interractions out further to make them more realistic. Don't let characters just suddenly speak their dark pasts. No real person really does that.

Honestly, your technical skills are wonderful, I think if you stretched your stories out a little bit in the way of interractions you'd have an absolutely /fantastic/ story (not to say it isn't wonderful already, of course). I hope to read more from you!

All I can say is More! Please? :-)

Go Glorfindel Go!

Good story :-)

*sniff* *sad whimper*

Oh poor Erestor, reliving the horror that had such a terrible effect on him.

Thanks for the updates. I am liking this story. Like your young twins in Imladris. Poor Cirdan and his dream and then waking to find it was not what he thought. What a disaster. Like the inclusion of Erestor and Glorfindel into the mix. Looking forward to more.

Interesting start. Loved them getting interrupted. Looking forward to more.