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schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Exceptionally well done! cannot wait to see what more you have to write.
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story :-) Thank for writing it, and I hope there is still more!
person Tenar10r
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
06-05-08 Are you going to continue this? I hope so :)
person Rozzan
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great wedding. Looking forward to what comes next!
person Rozzan
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful kiss!
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! It's in one word Amazing. With a capital A! Really! I came across your story just this morning, and after reading the first chapter, I was enchanted. I locked myself away in my room until I finished it. And I found the later chapters to be even more brilliant then the first ones. I adore the way you portray Eomer and Lothíriel, and of course their growing love/relationship. It's so beautifully written! I can't wait to read more!!! Awesome job!!!
person Tenar10r
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE! Great wedding!
person dornons
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this one! A little long, you went into great detail about feelings and the core of characters. Well done, please do continue this story.
person Macheil
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this story. It's hard to find a good Eomer and Lothiriel story. You seem to have a window on these characters. Along with their emotions. Your very talented! Can't wait for the next chapter....Macheil
person Rozzan
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter One. I like your characterisation of Eomer and his misgivings about taking a bride in a way that is contrary to his culture yet knowing he has a duty to his people to feed and and care for them. His kingship still fitting uneasily on his shoulders after all the tumultuous events of the recent past yet him having to grow into it. Excellently done. I too share your your fascination with the Rohirrihim and way of life and country. Looking forward to reading more of this story.