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OMG!!! I come back from Italy and find the story finished and a sequel is up...Happy Unbirthday to me!!!!!!!You made my week.

Very good chapter.

Yay, the twins are good...you had me going there for a second.

Good chapter.

Good chapter.

I like this story, it's interesting. But you need to do some serious work on comma usage. There are thousands of places where a comma was necessary, but not used. It's a very easy thing to work on. Your story is interesting, you use a lot of helpful detail and I like the way you wrote it, you just need to work on the technical aspects ^_^

I never seem to get to your updates right as their posted, but it is nice to come and have a nice group of chapters to read all at once. So much happened in this set, I feel like I'm going to forget something I wanted to comment on. Anyways, I'm glad his parents found him. I will say, I wasn't expecting Thranduil to be his 'mother', but I really don't know much of that character, just what I've read in other stories, so I can't say it's out of place. I like the idea of a red haired, green eyed elf. Very interesting. Almost makes me think of the TA in my physics lab :)

I'm sorry that Legolas lost his baby. Hopefully with his parents and his soon-to-be (I imagine) bonded there, he'll be okay eventually. And eventually he'll be ready and get pregnant again, maybe a boy this time (I like little boys). I hope they catch whoever pushed him (I'm suspecting it might be the elf who tried to rape him in Rivendell) and I hope he doesn't get to him again.

Another thing, am I imagining things or does Haldir seem to be developing a bit of a crush on Legolas. If so, how cute :)

And I guess that's the end of the review, I think I got everything. And I hope you update again soon. Though I guess I don't have to worry about that, since you seem to update so quickly that I always have a nice bunch of chapters to read. I look forward to it.

I really like this story, and I suspect I know what that queasiness is in Legolas.... :) I'm glad Thranduil is not a mean creepy Elf-Lord, and I hope once the initial fireworks are over he will prove likely to do the right thing and not separate the lovers. Elrond/Legolas is my favourite pairing... :)

Do you archive anywhere else? I would love to know when you update!

Thank you for sharing this story!

Jasta

well I missed the newest updates so I had a nice long set of chapters to read just now. Loved them, you really do write well. You handle the old language of the LOTR series well. I like where the story's going with Elrond and Legolas. I just hope that Thranduil doesn't make things too miserable and that he does well and right for his son.

I really like what you're doing with this fic. :) Keep it up.