rate_review Reviews

I just adored this fic! Particularly the first chapter, but to read of the quest with the two lovers there! Aw! I was hoping you ould write more!

I've been enjoying your vision of the story, with the way you've wound this new romance into it, but I'll confess to being distracted by syntactic errors, as well as tense shifts, incohesive jargon, and misused words. For example:

"The architects try to immolate the style of the elves"

I assume you meant imitate. To immolate is to kill something by burning, or to sacrifice something by fire.

On a more positive note, though, I'm very fond of the way you present Boromir. He's lovely.

Wow. I'm impressed dude... No words can explain how awesome you wrote this story.

This is a fantastic story! I got so sucked into it I was up all last night reading it. I can see you have researched thoroughly. I love the way you built up their relationship so strongly, it was brilliant, and the strong friendship between them beautifully explained the budding love. I also liked the very subtle sexual tension that grew between them. The altering paragraphs between the characters points of view worked very very well. Legolas/ Boromir is my favourite pairing of all time, there arent enough fics about them. Thankyou for writing this :) .

I remember this story and I have read it again with a lot of joy.
This is good, so please, update soon.

this is an amazing story and it is beautifully written, Theres been a shortage of Legolas/Boromir stories so i really can't wait until your next update