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for Chains Unseen

by Mawgy

schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the way the story is going and one hopes you will update often.
person Sione
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooo how nice to see a new chapter, I been looking forward to it. :)
Well ok I guess I can put up with her for awhile longer now when Glorfindel puts her in place, yay! I hope it doesn't get too angsty though, poor Erestor! It's good that he has Glorfindel on his side at least.
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally loving this fic! Don't worry about how long it takes to update... I'm a little slow myself when it comes to updating.

Anyway, I see nothing has changed with Glorfindel's mother. Okay, she is one righteous bitch. I can't believe that she is actually willing to risk Erestor's health for the sake of a child. What is she thinking? And now Erestor's parents are being jerks. Although I am curious as to what they were talkingl about at the doorway. So, they made some type of deal with Glorfindel's mother for him (Erestor) to have a child within a certain time frame. Hmm, I guessing at 3 to 6 months 12 tops for Erestor to get pregnant. Something doesn't sound right with that. Why would Glorfindel's mother push so hard for him to have a child?

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
person Sione
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay more to read and yes I did like it! I wonder if Erestor will be pregnant or not... I bet Glorfindel’s mum will be pretty mad if he isn’t soon. Couldn’t someone just “accidentally” push her off a high cliff or something? *blinks innocently* ;)
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now, I kind of feel sorry for the healer who had to bear the bad news of Glorfindel not wanting children. Again, I'm sure the Erestor will feel brunt of her wrath.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
person Sione
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I definitely think this will be interesting, I hope to read more soon! :)
person Anon
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Violent hatred, would be the better term. That's the worst kind of mother right there. *stabbitystabstab*
She dies an untimely death, right? I'll help :D

You have a beautiful writing style and have done an excellent job. I've enjoyed this story so far, so I hope it continues.
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm satsified with the answer, thank you very much!

And as for Glorfindel's mother...I have only this to say: she is a righteous bitch! I'm surprised Glorfindel didn't go off on her. For a minute there I thought he was going to loose he temper and snap. I feel real sorry for Erestor for having to put up with an in-law like that.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that Glorfindel was just a little insensative to Erestor not to realize that he (Erestor) was in a little bit of pain.

Excellent work so far and I look forward to the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
person Ambrooke
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like it!!! Can't wait to read more!!

Thanks,
Amber