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I'm sorry this story seems to have come to a standstill, I'd like to see more of it.

Can I have som'ore please? I love this story. I didn't find it till I looked @ your author page. I definately see more coming!

So, really hoping you intend to continue this story and update soon! :-)

Dear Mawgy,
I love your story so far. But something tells me Erestor with his low self esteem will be stupid enough to get pregnant to soon. What were his parents talking about in the fourth chapter anyway? He seems to have to be pregnant within a fixed time due to this damned contract signed so many years ago?
Talking of parents - everybody is grumbling about Glorfindels mother. But what about Erestors parents? Selling their child off, consenting to not rising it themselves, to not even seeing it, to allow it to be taught having no own free will (so it is even considering it's own live worth nothing but being a birthing machine). That contract is one to the devil. I thought slavery is forbidden by Eru. Why have the Valar not intervended yet? Some lightning bolt to struck down at least one of the signatories would be nice. *grumbles angrily*

Still I'm looking forward to all new updates and soon please as I am biting my nails here ;-)

Curse Glorfindel's mother!! I just want to..to...shove her into a vat of army ants and watch her suffer! GRR! And Erestor's parents aren't nearly AS bad, but still bad! Curses to the parents!

Other then that.. :3 Such a lovely story between Erestor and Glorfindel you have written. I look forward to the next update.

Yes, finally a new chapter! *does happy dance*

Let me guess, Erestor is not going to take that potion, right? He's going to have that baby whether Glorfindel like it or not. Well, he better keep himself alive then! It would be terrible if he died, but I don't think you can be that mean to poor Erestor...at least I hope not.

I'm already looking forward to the next chapter!

Glad the wait is over! This is still a great story.

love it...please don't take so long for update
great storyline..keep it up

Hmm, I think by reading this chapter and knowing what I now know about Erestor, I firmly believe that Erestor is going to do something in the near future to ensure that he gets pregnant whether Glorfindel wants a child or not.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~

I just read your story so far. I don't care for the "mpreg" thing, but I like the Erestor/Glorfindel pairing, so I thought I'd see if you could persuade me. I find that your universe is shaping up in a consistent way, so maybe I could find it believable. I like the story, but wonder if you'd be open to a little copyediting? ("Whom" is the objective case, "who" is the subjective, so you use "who" when it's the subject of the sentence.) Anyway, thanks for writing. I'm not sure this review will be accepted. I see this note at the bottom about "Due to hijacking, the yahoo groups are pending until further notice," so let's see what happens.