rate_review Reviews

This was excellent. Haldir sure had some demons to face. Thankfully Nurael was there to help. Nice job.

I really like the story. Haldir is a favorite of mine, and it's awesome to see someone writing about him. But the medical and psychology stuff, I see where it fits, but with how detailed you get into it and the terms you use it sounds like modern doctors talking, which may have been the point but it somewhat destroys the rest of the atmosphere. Sure the elves would have healers and some structure, but the way they talk and talk about modern ethical practices, professionalism, etc. just made a big portion of the story unbelievable.

Don't get me wrong. I like the story, but I really think you over did that part.

Alsome Story!!! I could not stop reading once I started, I had to know what happended next!