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oh bliss to have them back together again even though its in such dire circumstances because of the poison, but hey I would poison myself too to be with Legolas! Seriously, great storyline, full of stuff to think about psychologically and spiritually. How could you end it there though! You swine!!!! So sorry to hear of your RL sadness but somehow please please continue with this story I am desperate to find out what happens.

Please, please, please put more chapters up!!! I love this story and the way you have the characters interacting with each other. Can't wait to read on in their lives!

Finally a new chapter!!!! I swear writers must get hard-ons from cliffhangers cause they happen way to often to be funny anymore. But i will sit here patiently until you FINALLY tell me what happens. Very well written even though the filler seemed to drag on. But thats why its filler. please keep writing !

Another brilliant exciting chapter. Oh please dont let it be too long before the next one. I can't wait much longer!

This story has an amazing plot line! I can not wait to read the next chapters!

OMG I love this story My heart has been pounding the entire time reading this!!!! Please update soon I cannot wait!!!1

Wonderful to have another chapter. They really are on a tour of Europe! Glad they are in York, yes beautiful city, and hope Greyham can shed light on the story and help them, fascinating stuff. Was totally blown away with Legolas's concern for Alysse and her safety, the whole thing of her mortality and his immortality was heartwrenching and especially him using the candle and its flame as an illustration of her life and his darkness when it burns out was just perfect and poetic and emotional. Excellent. Keep writing!

Aaargh! Reading sprint has just ground to a devastating halt! It's excruciating. I want them to meet Gan - oops - Greyham So Badly now! And the heart breaks at their pain. You write so convincingly. Bookmarkness!!! Looking forward to your next chapter!

I love this story. I am addicted to mythology, fairy tales, and ancient legends, not to mention The Lord of the Rings, so to find all my favorites wrapped up into one story is amazing. Also, your writing style is so professional. I've only come across a handful of fanfic authors that are talented and original, and you are definitely one of them. Though I am a little frustrated at how drawn out the reunion is. Does Legolas have to be so damn stubborn and refuse to visit Alice in her dreams?! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Great to read another chapter. Nicely written between Legolas and Alysse when he declares his inability to keep away from her and that he loves her and that she finally realises and admits her love of him too. I think that is the most beautiful, hopeful, astonishing, magical moment ever in anyones lifetime, when they realise and tell each other that they love one another. It is one we all crave, especially us romantic souls, (but now at my age and with hindsight and much experience and cynicism, I in real life now view it also as a moment of madness, pure shared insanity) Here in your story though I can forget about that and it made me remember and cry and sigh with longing, really good. I am glad you wrote about this moment and the build up to it and the emotions beforehand between the two of them were wonderful, and the promise of what could be now,hope you enjoyed writing it.
I am getting desperate now for the two parts of her life to come together. Though I know busy you are in real life, so I will attempt to wait patiently for that full moon.