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This chapter took forever to arrive! Well worth the wait though :)

UPDATE!!!!!!

PLEase please update x.x i have to kno wht happens. Will Legola be save too?

Poor Legolas :( I hope the opportunity comes for he and his child to get back to Mirkwood soon. I also wonder who's elfling that was that the elves found?

Oh so very sad, hope things get better soon.

That boy is one of Legolas' children I presume :(

*shrieks! You updated! :) The update was interesting as usual. I hope nothing serious happens to Saelbeth and that Legolas doesn't lose the baby. :(

It's great so far; but tell me one thing though. I remember reading a story like this one long time ago on adultfanfiction.net. Is it that you're re-writing a story?

For the love of Valar.... +__+

How I love this story so much...
Are you sure this is your first time writing fiction?
How I love Dali...I really pity him for losing his newborn baby, no matter how it isn't wanted but the most important thing is Dali wants it...It pained me to see how he keeps getting hurt...

Please continue...I'm really looking forward to see how Dali and his baby get through with their horrible life...
Wait...Is the baby a boy or a girl? At the summary, you implicated that 'Legolas has a daughter' but inside the chapter where he gave birth, he thought that the baby should be a boy...I would like it to be a boy though, so he can understand the pain his bearer going through...

Please please continue...don't stop here...This is one gorgeous story indeed...You still have a long way to go...I like how you use Elvish language on the story, it's beautiful.

TO ALL THE FOLKS OUT THERE, PLEASE FIND THIS STORY AND REVIEW, DAMN IT...!!!! DON'T LET THIS BEAUTIFUL STORY GO TO WASTE...!!!!

this is so good! please update soon!
i really enjoy your style of writing and your characterisation. poor Legolas!