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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your story idea is really cool, but you need a beta reader to help you rewrite this so it flows much better.
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the outline of the story and the first chapter although short, is very nice! You should continue... I just love Haldir stories and it's been a long time since I've read one!
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute!
Looking forward to reading more.
Looking forward to reading more.