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for Sleeping With the Enemy

by Melethen

person dornons
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope you continue with this story as you have kept me entertained. Please update and soon
person duffy
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very, very, very -- all right, I could put any number of very's on here -- but it was a very nice update. Very hot and tender.
person Naira
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwww! that was just soooo sweet -hugs them both, then steals them away with evil laughter- mine mine mine...

ooh and please, update again soon
person Elftart
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, I am very impatient for the next chapter....please hurry
person Naira
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Elladan better be nice to Legolas from now on!!!
person duffy
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I decided to set up an account. That way I wouldn't keep pestering you through email. I thought I would just hit the site before getting ready for work, and there you were, much to my delight. I missed you last week, but I understand that life gets in the way. Lovely update. The story is progressing at a wonderful pace. Believe me, I'm not going anywhere on this one.

Stay well!
Daphne
person duffy
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In my haste this morning to read and get to work, I didn't notice that you had updated "two" chapters. Sorry for missing that. Well, it seems you have started the reconciliation. I'm sure you will have some bumps in the road for us all. Well done.

Later,
Daphne
person Naira
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, you really should have them be nicer to each other, poor things hehehehe

Great update, and I like how you used Elrohir to discover the kiss, simply by watching his brother, seems fitting.

Please update again soon (also with your other story...and yes, I often forget to review :P)
person Anon
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*grins* Very promising. ^^
However, I would be careful with expressions such as "fucking" if I where you. Not that it offends my sensibilities, but the expression seems a bit out of place among the elves.
person HHS
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Elladan is a cruel,obnoxious,stupid elf.He better not go any further.