AFF Fiction Portal
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am surprised not many have reviewed this story so far. I mean it has 24 wonderful chapters so far and under ten reviews. You should be up to hundred by now. I love your main character she is such a sweetie. I found the last chapter that you have updated to be a page turner. Anyways I am reviewing in hopes it will encourage you to keep up the good work.

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person Anon
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I look forward to see revelation of Eleiann’s origin. I would like to see more interaction betwwen elves and Eleiann.
person Madietta
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story very much, it is well researched and well written. I am looking forward to reading more. I just have one minor problem - how is it possible that your characters gained such a good command of Sindarin? What is left in Tolkien's writings is certainly not enough to construct the entire language. I realize your whole story is totally AU anyway but this kept niggling me.
person Macheil
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Thank you for this wonderful story. I love the way you are preparing the characters for their journey to Middle Earth. I can't wait to read what happens next! Thanks again