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November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay Another chapter! It was kind of a set up chapter but still well written. i am glad owen is getting married and he seems happy. cant wait to see more!!
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
finally a new chapter. She knows she needs to hold her tongue yet she still says too much. I had a cliche soap opera moment where i thought it would be cool if she had a twin that she thought died but she didnt. for some reasons i love adding twins to story lines. lol. sorry im rambling. I cant wait to see where the plot goes with this cause i mean it seems like you are just scratching the surface. Keep up the good work! ^.^
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March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and it's outline. I can't wait until the next chapter. When will you be putting out the next chapter. I hope it is soon.
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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay he won! I like turin. Its too bad Elleian wasnt born with a twin. That would have made a cool plot twist. Maybe not original but i would have liked it. please keep writing!
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July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well im glad you finally updated. too bad there was not all that much to the chapter. I hope to read more sooner than this one came along.
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. Please update soon. I look forward to reading more.
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is freaking amazing! More please!!
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. I am really looking forward to your next update. One question though. You have all of this happening in the second age, but with everything going on in your story shouldn't it be the third age? I know you said that you were messing with the timeline, but this seemed really drastic since the twins and Arwen weren't born until the third age. But other than some confusion on how things are going to fit together, I thing this is really great.
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoy your story. I only found it yesterday and I couldn’t stop reading and so you made my day. I like how you describe everything to a point where I can see it like a movie in front of my eyes. I also enjoyed your style of writing and I do hope you'll continue with your story. I really can’t say what I like best because the story as a whole is just amazing and I'd love to read more. Especially what the elder twins will say to their new sister and how Ted and his son will fare. Please write more!
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another new story I have discovered and I have read part 1 and 2 up to here.
This is really good - I like the blend of earth and Middle Earth
This is really good - I like the blend of earth and Middle Earth