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I love this chapter. Perfect how you explain the different sexual cultures of Jordan and Legolas when they have to stay in the same room. You are so right that sex with someone ties you to to them physically and emotionally. Poor Jordan, having felt coming alive again with Legolas and realising that her previous affair with Christian would not be acceptable to him. Oh dear I hope she does not leave, but whatever are they going to do? And I must admit the thought of Legolas as a pure virgin makes me want him even more, how special! I love how you write their emotions and thoughts. Nice to see Legolas's friendship with Aragorn too.

Loved the descriptions of the city and the gardens and Aragorn and Arwens dining table. And now you leave us with another cliffhanger. Please write some more quickly. I am loving this story.

La de da de da! An update. Yay! I love this story. And more Jordan/Legolas kissage. Need more, and very soon!

Oh Lovely another long chapter to read. Great how Legolas and Jordan's relationship with Jordan is developing, slowly but sensously and emotionally. The kiss was gorgeous. I love the voice you have given to Legolas, so courteous and precise, perfect for him. Hope you are over your illness now and look forward to more soon.

This is a wonderful story. I like Jordan a lot and appreciated her backstory so we got to know her as an individual and now having got onto the middle earth chapters I am thrilled by your characteristaion of Legolas, so noble, chivalrous and kind with an undercurrent of emotion and passion. Just gorgeous. I like how slowly you are building the relationship between them and showing their respective doubts and desires. Am very much looking forward to more. Totally hooked.

Wow, I'm really glad I found this. I am up to chapter 7. I NEVER read girl falls into middle earth stories because usually they are just dire rubbish, but this is fantastic. You have built up an entire world and back story with the D'ni universe and the father as archaeoligist and many minor charcaters in the D'ni universe and in the hospital, who are totally beleivable and Jordan herself is wonderful, so richly drawn, her profession as a doctor, her identity as as a daughter and her inner emotional life are brought to life so skillfully and you make us care about her as a person. This is fantasy at its best. Can't wait to find out what happens.

Oh dear. Ominous indeed. Faramir, Faramir, Faramir (shaking head). And those two a**hole guards! Why is it when people do wrong, they cannot accept responsibility for what they've done, but in turn blame the person they hurt? They brought it on themselves, the yutzes!

Oh, I want Jordan and Legolas to smooch again. More smoochies!

I looooooooooooove this chapter. LOVE it!

I especially love the kiss.

I'm sorry I can't be more thorough in this review, but please know that I am checking every day for updates. (I tried to sign up at your website, but it won't cater to hotmail. :(

Excellent story, please keep it going!

And so it begins... Oooh, very, very promising!
Lovely chapter! Full of emotions and amazing description of places, feelings and actions!
The kiss... what a kiss!!! Legolas and Jordan are so meant to be... I know I sound like a teenager, but they are so good together!
Excellent work as always! :)

Yaaay! An update!

And a kiss!

Can't wait for more!

MEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! I must have resolution! Gah, talk about killer story. This one is a bombshell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm in utter awe! Buuuuut, I'm dying for the next chapter! You're making die a slow death at my monitor. Just so you know. =]

This is the first style of reading I have read that you have. It's great! I love it. I'm going to say that you are now one of my favorite Authors! YAY!