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for The Teacher

by pip

person Anon
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
beautiful, so so sad! thranduil could be nicer but he is grieving too. he is king now and still strong. don't give up, elrond!
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM


I love this story - The scene in the tent where Elrond grieved for Oropher was extremely good and he kissed Thranduils boots pretty easily didn't he?

Looking forward to the next part Hugs Binky x
person Lee
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story and can't wait for the next chapter.
person cel
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh Elrond must be shocked... please write another chapter!
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful, still love your story! more please?

lissa
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely as always! I still like your Oropher and Thranduil seems very different from his Ada. But then sons often are. Loved it Hugs Binky x
person Anon
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please write another chapter soon, i want to know what happens! love this,

lissa
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I know i have said this before but the descriptions are so beautiful - this is from someone who doesn't often read desriptive passages. I am intrigued about legolas's and elronds agreement and what thranduils letter contained. has elrond agreed to be legolas's love slave or something as a payback for something in the past perhaps? The cherry blossom bit was so sweet.

Sending Mel the elfling round with a bag of 50p pieces. Hugs Binky x
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've just read your disclaimer - 'personally wash the elves down'ROFL !!!!

Oropher is so sweet and playful and Elrond needs to get his 'I am a mature elf' stick out of his ass. I wonder will Legolas be as sweet?

Lovely writing as usual - is Erestor still with you with that big black whip? lol

Hugs Binky x
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it, more please!!!