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for The Teacher

by pip

schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to hear there is further torment for Elrond lol

Once again I am lost in your words. I like Legolas and you write him so well. Your descriptive writing is beautiful and the part where you describe Elrond's islands of pleasure was enchanting.

Looking forward to the next part Hugs Binky x
person micmar
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story. Whenever I go to this site and you haven't updated, I am so disappointed. I don't have indepth insight to these stories I just know what is entertaining to me and all your stories are just that. Thanks, I wish I could write like you.
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? I have just read this and I am so impressed. Once again you have taken a situation that could have been quite short and perfunctory and made it sensitive, beautiful and even dreamlike. The contents of the letter are being introduced and everything is now falling into place. You write the virginal Legolas so well and I like that Elrond can go red still.

Please do not give up writing this because of lack of comments - because I would miss it! I am always looking for updates to this story when I come onto AFF and this is easily the best story you have written in my opinion although I think you probably will not share that viewpoint lol

Big Hugs Binky x
person Lee
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, thanks for the quick update!Very interesting portrayal of Legolas!
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good too. I am glad you wrote about Legolas, and you write it so well. Hugs Binky x
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch8 - I am drowning in your words! But then again i always do :D I think this is the best chapter yet. Hugs Binky x
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the underground cavern idea and description, infact, i like how you described the caves, I could actually imagine elves living there and liking it. Now I am on the edge of my seat wondering what is going to happen evil cliffie princess!

Hugs Binky x
person Anon
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another update, cool you're fast! thranduil is still not nice but i know why he's doing it now, because elrond needs a leader. please update soon!
person Anon
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say I did not think I would like this from the description but you have surprised me with how good this story is. It is not centered on the sex like I feared but on character development. It is a great take on a part of Middle-Earth history that gets not written about very often. I will be back to check for future updates!

Lirian
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lucky for Elrond that has Thranduil to divert him from his grief and give him a future direction (even if it is not he he had evisaged it at first)

The wash scene is a work of art - so detailed and so loaded with much unsaid.

Love it, as always, Hugs Binky x