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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
An uir is a nice story, you have a nice plot going on and sweet and romantic stories are my favourite. It's funny how Elrond always appears serious and regal and wise even a bit stern on most occasions but when it comes to how he behaves with his love ones (no matter who), we always describe him romantic and very caring and spoiling his lover, he is so sweet. He must just be this way, I guess. So I like your Elrond and the other characters also.
I have one bemol however, and please do not get offended about it because I would not write a comment if I did not like your story. But I think you seriously need a beta. Some of the times, the writing is so mixed up that the meaning becomes confusing and in general it makes reading difficult.
If you are interested I could beta your story for you, but you don't have to accept ther offer: there are a lot of people who are always happy to beta a new story, check the posting on betareading in LOTR section or this address http://www.geocities.com/natgel/beta.html
cheers
Dwelf
An uir is a nice story, you have a nice plot going on and sweet and romantic stories are my favourite. It's funny how Elrond always appears serious and regal and wise even a bit stern on most occasions but when it comes to how he behaves with his love ones (no matter who), we always describe him romantic and very caring and spoiling his lover, he is so sweet. He must just be this way, I guess. So I like your Elrond and the other characters also.
I have one bemol however, and please do not get offended about it because I would not write a comment if I did not like your story. But I think you seriously need a beta. Some of the times, the writing is so mixed up that the meaning becomes confusing and in general it makes reading difficult.
If you are interested I could beta your story for you, but you don't have to accept ther offer: there are a lot of people who are always happy to beta a new story, check the posting on betareading in LOTR section or this address http://www.geocities.com/natgel/beta.html
cheers
Dwelf
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aiya, this was so sad at first but then turned so wonderfully romantic! I can't wait to see who you find for Glorfindel, for he deserves someone too. Great fic so far!!
*hugs*
Jana
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Jana
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that Elladan and Elrohir approve, which I assume that they do, if they were talking about their ada finally wising up *smiles*
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