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by pip

person Alli G
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting turn...
person Esteliel
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a new chapter! *hugs Pip*
Discovering that you posted a new chapter this morning was really the best way imaginable to start the day! Can it get any better than holding a cup of hot coffee in your hands while reading about what new tortures Sauron chooses to inflict on Legolas and Maglor? *g*

You paint such incredibly powerful scenes, Pip... rereading this, I realised that even with all the things that are yet to come, this is one scene that has always stuck with me - the image of Maglor playing the harp until his fingers are bleeding, just to please Sauron who is not even listening. *shivers* It's really the perfect symbol for their twisted relationship...
person Pen.
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really beautifully written & amazing imagery all the way through. I'll definitely be looking for further updates; it's nice when you can just let the author tell the story and not have to untangle the web of badly constructed plot and grammar, etc.
Thank you for this creation!
person chaotic_binky
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have just read chapter 3 - What an incredible baddie Sauron is, I almost feel sorry for Legolas, i even feel sorry for the trees. Loved it! Now hurry up and write faster! lol binky x
person chaotic_binky
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are so good at this! It flows well and I can visualise everyhting you describe. I have read the ilss stories and this brings it all nicely together tx binky x
person Alli G
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story... really dark.... i hope theres a happy ending...
person Nessa Ar-Fieneil
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I didn't read the auther name before I read the story, but I thought I recognized your style of writting. ;) Anyway I've always had a soft spot in my heart for Maglor so don't be too mean to him.
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow what a start more please?
person tabby
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh no don't hurt Legolas Sauron!
hehe I love mpreg ^-^ so egolas will have a child from Sauron, will it be evil or will it be good like his nana? ^^ I hope they will escape together. maybe his brother can free him^^
person Daphne
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I mean that in a good way (bg). I'll be impatiently waiting for more.