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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So Athan is a little sneak is he? Make Sauron whip his ass for being a tell tale lol I loved the sequence where they told each other about life outside in the forest. Looking forward to the next part. tx binky x
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Athan needs a damn good slapping but maglor dare not and legolas wont even see that there is anything wrong! And mithedhel has buggered off - probably at the suggestion of sauron? loved it and yes i do want to see a sequel so i am going to tie you to the computer and stand over you with endless cups of coffee lol tx binky x
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good old maglor for trying to resist sauron. At least we know why Athan hates maglor - a bit of a surprise that he hates legolas too. Has sauron spawned a child just like himself or a viper in his bosom? I hope its a viper lol tx binky x
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So Athan has decided to live away from his parents, hm, he will find that living away from home is not all its cracked up to be. I liked the scene where sauron stopped maglor from fading - you could almost believe that sauron is capable of finer feelings! loved it as usual tx binky x
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahaha sauron has had horrid things happen to him instead of doing them to others. The snow scenes are lovely as is mithedhel's realisation of what snow is. love it tx binky x
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn is their no escape from sauron for maglor! Ah well never mind - of course there isnt because that would be the end of the story lol tx binky x
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, dear me... this is just... heartbreakingly beautiful. And frightening. And fan-frigging-tastic.... I don't have enough good words to describe this. It is brilliant, it is beautiful, it is SO well done... my heart aches for Maglor and Legolas both, for the children, even on some bizarre level for Sauron... and I fear what will come when the two escapees together or separately encounter others.... God! This is the kind of writing that sticks with one forever. Thank you SO much for sharing this glorious dark vision!
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As this is very unlike most of the stories you get to read about Legolas I'm curious how it will end...
It isn't that easy to give feedback on every part and I usually wait until I'll read the whole story, since I usually start reding first when they finished.
It isn't that easy to give feedback on every part and I usually wait until I'll read the whole story, since I usually start reding first when they finished.
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor legolas! Sauron says that he could put him to sleep for the birth and then refuses! At least you didnt skip over the birth scene like a lot of stories do and there was some blood as well! Off to read the next one now tx binky x
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how will sauron react to Maglor being raped? although sauron might enjoy watching he wouldnt like the taking of his property would he? i can see Brandir is for the chop soon lol But did brandir do it so that sauron would kill him and end his misery? questions, questions lol binky x