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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow - I wasn't expecting that ending! And I don't think i've ever read a story where, at times, I actually felt compassion for Sauron! I can't wait to rad your next story and find out what happens to these characters.
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story. The last chapter blew my socks off. I read it over and over. So powerful and riveting. Your ideas are so amazing! The scene between Legolas and his son was incredible in its intensity. And then there's Maglor, who knows exactly who Legolas is, but plans to screw around with his mind! I wanted Maglor to find some measure of happiness, but what he plans to do to poor Legolas is evil! I hope Maglor gets his just desserts! I'm eagerly awaiting the sequel!
Nim
P.S. WARNING! This part may be squicky for some of you! This is a bit late, but I want to commend you for your birth scene. It was not too squicky for me, because the C-Sect you described happened to my mother. Back in the 40s, it was believed if you did a C-Sect on a woman after she went into labor, she would die. My mother was too small to give birth normally, so an early C-Sect was planned, but my sister decided to come earlier than that. My mom was in the Emergency Room, and the ER doc walked in, assessed the situation, and said, "We can't save both the mother and the baby, so let's save the baby." Mom started to scream, so the nurses quickly put a cloth in her mouth, and tied her down. Dr. Sauron told my mother there was no time for anesthesia. All Mom could do was scream against the cloth. He cut her wide open (since she was going to die, he didn't try to be neat). Right then, Mom's OB doc walked in, shoving people aside and cursing a blue streak. He saved Mom, but she was so messed up it took her many tries before I was born. So from a technical point of view, your description of a cruel C-Sect was dead on.
Nim
P.S. WARNING! This part may be squicky for some of you! This is a bit late, but I want to commend you for your birth scene. It was not too squicky for me, because the C-Sect you described happened to my mother. Back in the 40s, it was believed if you did a C-Sect on a woman after she went into labor, she would die. My mother was too small to give birth normally, so an early C-Sect was planned, but my sister decided to come earlier than that. My mom was in the Emergency Room, and the ER doc walked in, assessed the situation, and said, "We can't save both the mother and the baby, so let's save the baby." Mom started to scream, so the nurses quickly put a cloth in her mouth, and tied her down. Dr. Sauron told my mother there was no time for anesthesia. All Mom could do was scream against the cloth. He cut her wide open (since she was going to die, he didn't try to be neat). Right then, Mom's OB doc walked in, shoving people aside and cursing a blue streak. He saved Mom, but she was so messed up it took her many tries before I was born. So from a technical point of view, your description of a cruel C-Sect was dead on.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I didn't see that coming. This is hands down the most disturbing story I've ever read(I mean that as a compliment). Brilliant. Absolutly brilliant. ;)
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jeez, you got me with that one. I did not see the end that you wrote coming at all! This whole
story was like a roller coaster ride from beginning to end and what a fine ride it was. Did I see
where you posted that there is a sequel to this?? I hope so.
story was like a roller coaster ride from beginning to end and what a fine ride it was. Did I see
where you posted that there is a sequel to this?? I hope so.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that they escaped, although I wish they could have brought the children with them. And Maglor... I want him to be free!! I want him to find true happiness! I don't want Sauron to have him (in the end at least) and I don't want the Valar to be as uncaring and cruel as Sauron made them out to be!
I also can't wait to see what happens when Legolas gets back to Lorien or Mirkwood and has to relate his tale to the others. I can just see some elf at some point commenting to him that he is beautiful without realizing, and Legolas freaking out. heheheh
I hope your surgery goes well!!
I also can't wait to see what happens when Legolas gets back to Lorien or Mirkwood and has to relate his tale to the others. I can just see some elf at some point commenting to him that he is beautiful without realizing, and Legolas freaking out. heheheh
I hope your surgery goes well!!
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Things really happen in the story. I know how it is to wish to get feedback on the stories you written and put up. I have some that has been here over a year and still hasn't been reviewed or very few.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I still think Maglor should have sailed then he could have had a hissy fit with the Valar for allowing Sauron to take him. At least he doesnt feel guilt anymore - a destructive and ruling emotion. So now he can look forward to other things cant he? loved it! binky x
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thats it! I don't like Maglor anymore! Unless of course, he is also up to something to protect Legolas. Loved the series - eagerly anticipating the next one tx binky x
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! You are evil!!
I love it!
And you did please me in one way: I just wanted Maglor to be happy, and it seems that he is. hehehe
I can't wait until the sequel!!!!
I love it!
And you did please me in one way: I just wanted Maglor to be happy, and it seems that he is. hehehe
I can't wait until the sequel!!!!
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Maglor! I am wondering - if Maglor one day says that he doesnt have any guilt and doesnt seek forgiveness or punishment for doing something awful, will that mean that Sauron will consider that he has moved a step further in his completion of his ultimate plan for Maglor? Is Sauron using Athan's eyes to see what is happenning in the room? Isnt Mithedhel sweet? Good luck for Monday - it will probably hurt a lot less than the pain you have been going through recently! Binky x