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by Espip

person ElenaDiVita
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was lovely! hihi In a way...Makes me like Glorfinny a little better -pets him- Good boy. I still think my theory on Legolas' pregnancy is right...lol
person ElenaDiVita
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh...you misunderstood, I prefer the Glorfindel/Legolas pairing, though, I'm starting to wonder if I do with Glorfindel being so mean pfffft...Please update again soon!!!
person ElenadiVita
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ugh my bad, my mind obviously wasn't clear, it was my mistake haha, cleared it up now though :p I really love the story, but I'm becoming less and less fond of Glorfindel...
person ElenaDiVita
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter (though personally I'm more fond of the Legolas/Elrond action) yet I was sooo sure Glorfindel was going to ask him to choose in this one -blush and giggles- I'm starting to wonder if Legolas would actually choose Finny, since Legolas seems to like his freedom in the bed so much :p

I want mooooore
person ElenadiVita
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I spent the entire afternoon reading up on this...and was actually sad not to see more...

I recall the 'not being able to have kids while still giving milk' too..is Elrond tricking him with the teaaa?
person sugarplum
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, goody! a new chapter! So is Legolas really pregnant or just nervous at being passed back and forth in this wicked game between Glory and Elrond? or is it really Glory's baby or will Elrond do something terrible and give Legolas something to get rid of it telling him its just to calm his stomach and what about Elladan? would he stoop so low as to do something?! Hmmmmm, oh the possibilities are endless!!!
person sugarplum
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is Alrighty then! So, whats next? I am glad that there will be a happy ending so please don't keep us waiting too long and at first I thought that Glory deserved what he got but poor Legs! torn between them both and confused to boot! Hope you will continue the other story and Haldir gets his!
person G10
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Legolas is in a terrible and desperate position.Im amazed how life loving he is, because I would be thinking about suicide, If I were in his place.
Briliantly written, with deep knowledge of the characters.
person anonymousTroll
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, he is. Cause he accepts everything and anyone. A person is responsible for his/her own actions. Legolas is not an innocent victim, he has the power to stop them, he always had. JUST SAYING NO. Elrond is married, and will be reunited with his wife sooner or later, there is no room for legolas in his life, I mean not an honored one. But, nobody in this fiction cares about honor anyway. Honor, loyalty, friendship and love have no meaning here. They know nothing about these feelings. I used to like your other fictions, though their way of love was very bizarre, it seemed more like a sex game, no intention to really hurt, at least, Glorfindel and legolas seemed to really care about each other. In here, the only feeling that they know is lust, there is no room for love. Worry not, anonymous troll says its farewell.
person nikkiling
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The emotions in this story are so twisted... I love every moment of it! I can understand exactly why Legolas eventually caved in to Elrond... and I can see why he has grown to love Glorfindel as well, despite his cruel ways.
Not to mention I spent several long moments at the end of chapter seven just sitting there with my arms wrapped around my chest. (ouches!)
I really enjoy the psychology of this fic though. You two are doing an amazing job, and this gives me something very enjoyable to look forwards to in the evenings. Thank you for making my heart ache; it's one of my favorite feelings.