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Hi, guys. Well, I can't separatet love from fidelity, so I really don't get Legolas here, If he loves Glorfindel as he claims to do why he is so eager for having sex with Elrond? Glorfindel even after figuring out Legolas's betrayal didn't take another lover, in my opinion he gained a lot of points for that. If you love a person, you will be faithful. I like Glorfindel even when he is a little bit evil (I know that he did a lot of mistakes regarding legolas, but so did legolas)and I don't see how Glorfindel and legolas can be together again if the baby who will be born (maybe next chapter) is Elrond's. Well, I know I would never forgive a husband or a lover if he get a child with another woman while we were together. Even, if we would manage to remain together the pain, the resentment would always be there like a poison.
Anyway, I think that this fiction is well written and I'm curious to know how it will end. I want to know how you will try to fix things for them. Hope, you won't try something like L/G/E .
Thanks for updating every day. Bye.

Love the dominant Legolas and submissive Elrond - sometimes a leader needs to take a break! Even though the end of their love scene was bittersweet, they are happy. You've left so many possibilities open - and poor Legolas was wrestling with all of them. I'm sure his pregnancy isn't helping his emotions - his hormones are so messed up it's easy to blow things out of proportion!

And what was Elladan thinking? Surely he's been around long enough to know you don't mess with someone in the final days of pregnancy! A rough horseback ride? Did he think a guy would be less prone to going into labor than a gal? I can think of all sorts of ways this scenario is going to play out, so I'm eagerly awaiting to see what tale you weave! What a cliffie!

Nim

That's sad, having contractions while there's no one there to support you...well...at least not someone that cares

Now that last line was hot!! I just love it! "...my prince..." *sigh*

Lovely update...Still not liking Glorfindel or ELrond all too much, they're meanies :p using Legolas like that

yay thanks - no cliffhanger, i am going away for a little while, wont be able to review, but i will when i get back, cant wait to read the new chapters!

Hmm somewhat better..What is it with their fascination with Legolas' milk..How selfish is that :p

Omg! whaaa I want more, you can't stop it there! Update again soon! I want to know how it goes on!!!!

Now that was a cruel place to end it!
But I just loved this last chapter. Legolas doing so well with the bow, and then the chase... I loved the chase.
I'm also finding myself very curious about Erestor... I keep thinking that he's hiding something.
Can't wait for more!!

ahhhh - longer chapters!!!!!! stop this!!! Its painful to the brain!