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for Pen-Estel

by Espip

person Nim
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story a lot, but please don't have Glorfindel parade Legolas around in the collar. Legolas has been gaining the respect of others in Imladris, and this would just drag him down again. Glorfindel can play all the D/S games he wants in the bedroom or other secluded places! If he feels he must do something to remind Legolas of his place, let it be something discreet that can be hidden by clothing.

Please let Legolas keep his dignity. Besides, didn't Elrond ordered his people to treat Legolas with respect? Wouldn't that apply to Glorfindel as well?

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
person ElenadiVita
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still don't think I like what Glorfindel does to Legolas, while it's sexy as hell, it doesnt exactly say 'i love you' :p
person Nina
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gladt that you updated. Finally, legolas learns how to say "NO". Bye.
person lenagirl
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, I hope you show Gil with the new baby next chapter that will be sooo cute!!!
person Nina
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad that you updated. Finally, legolas made his choice, but that kiss scne with elrond was not necessary. Yeah, I really don't like Elrond. Bye.
person ElenadiVita
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww! Yaaaay! -giggles- I was so afraid this was the last chapter -giggles- glad to see it wasn't!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Nina
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Glad that the child was Glorfindel's, at least, now they have a chance to built a real relationship.And there is no way in middle earth Glorfindel can trust Elrond again, he was such a bastard. And if legolas loves Glorfindel is time for him to prove that. About what you said if I were a guy and my wife after being raped continued to have sex with her rapist(about the first time Legolas had no choice, but for the other times he did have sex with Elrond by his own free will), I would leave her without a second thought. Bye.
person Juni
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi

The story is wonderful like always, but when last time I tried to check an update on Esteliel livejournal I saw that you must have a password? Why your's livejournal is now restricted. What happened? Can I gain access to it. I love your stories and memes and I would like to be able to read them again. I hope you can answer me on my mail or here because I can't find your e-mail.

I will be very greatfull for any help.

Thanks

Juni
person ElenadiVita
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww Erestor was sooo cute right there! hehe I knew he was a nice guy! Elladan was nice too...somewhat hihi. Me wants another update -bounce bounce-
person Nina
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No updates yet? Anyway, I just had forgotten to say that I liked Erestor and Elladan's behaviour very much last chapter. I guess they were really nice. Bye