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for Sunbathing

by Lynsey

person Anon
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you did this with the alternate endings. Very good!
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, neat idea, Would love to read the other ending, I like the way you set that up so it could end anyway....
Jane
person Jayn
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Luv the first ending, wonder what the other two will be like.