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Hmm! It figures, how an order like that seemed so strange from Faramir? Oh, woe to poor Eowyn, frightened by a little competition!

D'aww, they are united - somewhat - in a bittersweet way, eh? I truly loved the sex scene, arousing, rough, gritty in a very good way ... well, Orcish - just the way I like it, hohoho. I really cannot wait to see what happens next, you know. I lament that you will eventually end this story, but I hope that you will bring us more hot, eloquent Orcsmut... otherwise I might just throw some sort of hissy fit. =D I also lament the fact that AFF got rid of the Recommended Reading sections one could have in the profile. I used to have Captain of Mordor along with the Muzluk stories in mine, but they got rid of that function. Well, if they ever bring it back, this story and the others you have written are going there again. Toodles for now, and of course, Happy New Years and all that jazz.

Hmm, we did indeed forget the detail about the little Mrs., still traipsing about the castle, eh? Caught with the trousers literally down!

I very much enjoyed Captain of Morder and am delighted to find a sequel. What a wonderful combination of Uruk and Hobbit. Paid a band of orcs for a sightseeing trip? Acting as a legal representative? Stumbled onto an entire unmined vein of mithril- great stuff. Hope there's more soon.

I’m terrible at lurking around good stories, but I just wanted to let you know I’m still reading and enjoying this. Your writing flows so well that reading it is more like watching a film, and the dialogue of the characters is wonderful!

I hope you will give us all a present for christmas and post the next chapter soon. Shagrat and Faramir together again *sighs* I really never thought I’d say that… But since I have, I might as well go all the way and say that I hope it will be NC-17 *g*

Thank you so much for sharing your story.

Pip

See I'v now finished the chapter and you CAN'T leave it like that! They're about to meet and, argh I have to know what happens next!!!! No really I'm addicted (like you hadn't noticed that before As always a really good chapater (I really don't know how you do it, there has yet to be a bad one) its realy sweet that Ludlow rescued Shagrat, and then Shagrat trying to thank him. But poor Ludlow left alone (now for long right?) Anyway enough of my ramblings, more soon please, make my Christmas!!!
P.S I really think your characterisation of orcs is good I mean he really works, anyway, bye

only three?
:( I want more! ^__^
what will S do? what will he do?
Is there a chance, you will make few more side stories (yes, I mean the ones with a lot of sex) ?

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I'm only really half way through but I felt the urge to review because I'm as usual really enjoying it, I love the little details like Shagrats unsettling optimism or the way Ludlow is complety a mother hen, (and how Shagrat lets him) totaly sweet and endering. Or the sudden Oh God theres mass amounts of water coming at us, V. amusing. Okay see this is just me gushing but your story deserves mass amounts of it so, um there?

Poor Shagrat, just when things get better they drop back down again =[
I'm very intrigued to how things will turn out when he and Faramir reunite *claps excitedly* especially since the pamphlet incident wasn't particularly pleasant for Shagrat :D
Can't wait for the next update! x

Oooh, TWO chapters in two weeks, see you made my uh, month? Its getting SO good (not that it wasn't already) just the way you ended that your writing more soon right? (Might possibly be adicted to your story) I really like the contribution of the Hobbit and the Warg, not only do they add humor but they add a dimension to Shagrats personality, heh the giant killing idea was v. inspirational, I don't know where you come up with these things but they're really good. Anyway, do will insert my customary beg for more story here, please please please.