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for When Worlds Collide

by darkladyd2003

schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story so far. aside from a few spelling mistakes and some places that could use some tightening in terms of wording and such, this is really enjoyable. please update!
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting intake. I would appreciate an update. You are doing wonderful.
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It stopped! I didn't want it to stop! I really like this so far. It's an unusual combination but so well written and fun to read that I hope you continue it and update soon!
person kspence
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice premise for a story!
Just one minor suggestion - instead of 'collied' do you perhaps mean 'collide' though?
person Macheil
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Elven ability and the Force,wow, this makes for some really great reading! Thanks for the wonderful update. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Macheil
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lord of the Rings and Star Wars what a combination. Can't wait to see where this story goes! Thanks for the great story. Anxiously waiting for the next chapter!!
person choraleart
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like what you have done so far. I can not wait for you to post the next chapter. I love Obiwan!