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for The White Stag

by kenaz

schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is beautiful.
I very much enjoy it.
Thank you, for writing this.
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol, love that last line... ties it up nicely. Are you going to post a follow story with that idea? loved it... really well written.
person dornons
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will you do part 2? Pretty please?!!!!
person JastaElf
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read this several times, and cannot recall if I ever took a moment to review; if I have not, I apologize profoundly! This is one of THE best things I have ever read, which is why I come back to it over and over. So beautifully written, such excellent characterizations--and WHAT a grand story! I love that Legolas responds like a truly royal stag, turning the tables on his hunter; they couple as equals rather than the alternative, and it is much hotter thereby. :-) I like submission sometimes... but there are others where this kind of forceful response is called for, and this is definitely one of them. Thank you SO much for writing this and sharing it with us all!
person trish
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that I have read this before and liked it. I do hope that you do a festival in Mirkwood with the two of them and that you will update this story soon.
person IgnobleBard
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know I love this story! The characterizations of Haldir and Legolas are among my favorites in any fanfic. The hunt is exciting, the sex is yummy, the ending is perfect. I can't get enough of it.
person cows girl
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh will there be a second part? I really liked how you worded this story a challenge that couldn't be denied! I hope that you will update soon.