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November 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
well wrote, it would be lovely if you were to continue on with this story/series.
thank you
thank you
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Like this story, It's very interesting.
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May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this very much. You have made it plausible.
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May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
It is the year 2002... and Tari is wielding a bow? And since she is talikng about the 21th century - in Middle Age, the first reasonable quesion following this revelation would be: *OF WHAT AGE*? - because, you see, 2002 of the first or second age would have placed them in the past, 2002 of the fourth age might be rather just around the birth of chirst or something, not necessarily in outr present time. We do not know how many ages of the Valar have passed since the mythical tme Toklkien described, but that time must have been placed before or known history. And that would be more tan 2000 years in the past from now.
Or did you mean a different universe than ours and they all still live in some kind of Middle Age? Hmm. Maybe then this would be working... But
even then, why would Aragorn and Legolas be capable of understanding Tari, and Tari of understanding them? Wesron isn't english, and Sindarin is neither.
Whatever. Please go on. We would be delighted to learn more about this world of the 21th century of whatever age, especially if it should meant to be our own presence. It would be delightful to see our favorite characters interact with modern technology... that is, if your main goal is not just to have them interacting with *Tari*?
Aislynn
It is the year 2002... and Tari is wielding a bow? And since she is talikng about the 21th century - in Middle Age, the first reasonable quesion following this revelation would be: *OF WHAT AGE*? - because, you see, 2002 of the first or second age would have placed them in the past, 2002 of the fourth age might be rather just around the birth of chirst or something, not necessarily in outr present time. We do not know how many ages of the Valar have passed since the mythical tme Toklkien described, but that time must have been placed before or known history. And that would be more tan 2000 years in the past from now.
Or did you mean a different universe than ours and they all still live in some kind of Middle Age? Hmm. Maybe then this would be working... But
even then, why would Aragorn and Legolas be capable of understanding Tari, and Tari of understanding them? Wesron isn't english, and Sindarin is neither.
Whatever. Please go on. We would be delighted to learn more about this world of the 21th century of whatever age, especially if it should meant to be our own presence. It would be delightful to see our favorite characters interact with modern technology... that is, if your main goal is not just to have them interacting with *Tari*?
Aislynn
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May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, again! I went back to the first chapter and saw I had overread that you wrote the girl was speaking some kind of elvish, so please forgive my remarks in my first review; I missed that. The story looks interesting so far. Legolas and ragorn's reaction to Tolkien's books and to modern electricty are astonishingly calm, I would have expected them to be stunned and very distrustful after that revelations; but you fit it in nicely. Please continue! It will be interesting to learn how they find back to their own time!
Aislynn
Aislynn