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for Burning A Light Inside

by Arden

person MarzBar
schedule May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So Elrond had a daughter with the same name as his wife? I'm glad she found her family and yes, I want to know why Erestor drifted off. Thank you for sharing.
person MarzBar
schedule May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see she's been caught at what she's doing to herself before she managed to off herself. I hope Elrond, Erestor and Glorfindel can help her. More story please.
person MarzBar
schedule May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK, evil cliffie writer. She can't die or the story is over or you lied in the summary. I hope somebody figures out how to help her before she goes completely bonkers. More story please.
person MarzBar
schedule May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear. She's still cutting herself. I want to know why she does that and why it's related to her dancing. So, Erestor is not her father; is he becoming interested in her? More story please.
person MarzBar
schedule April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see she's going outside and not cutting herself so much. That cutting thing seems pretty scary to me. More story please.
person MarzBar
schedule April 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Does she want to fade so badly that she will not ask the questions her mother told her to ask? Is Erestor her father? More story please.
person MarzBar
schedule April 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're correct; that was an evil cliffie. Have the Elves come to rescue her? More story soon please.