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"DARO!" A familiar voice commanded, and a fine blade of solid steel rang against his knives, holding his attack.
"MarchWarden!" Legolas gasped out his surprise and relief as Haldir's broad, armored form appeared before him, "Forgive me!"

I like this part. Haldir appearing like that...well he made quite an impact, so to speak.

If the warnings are adequate, "don't like don't read" applies. In this case, I don't think they are. I read the story on the basis of the warnings, and the underlying message which it carries still give me the heebies. "Rape and slavery presented as a good idea" would be an adequate warning.

If, commentators are attempting to claim that 'don't like don't read' means 'don't like, don't comment' it never applies. Publicly posted work can be reviewed by any passer by and they are not obliged to be as polite as "King Thranduil" was. Given the appalling calumny on his character in this story, I thought he was most restrained.

I've contacted the moderators of AdultFanfiction.Net regarding the allegations of 'rape' and 'slavery', and will abide by their decision regarding my story description. If they concur that I have raped and enslaved Legolas then I will immediately change the description for "Fifteen Years" to reflect that decision.

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Thank you.

What's more important hairsyle or being able to see? with out having your hair in your face?

Dear Legolas Thranduilion

Did you know that most slash fics are written by females many of them that have too much time on their hands. Most of what I write as Gabby can attest to his harmless fluff. I have even subject elf lords to the indingity of a pillow fight.... It was a ilss chapter in which I took fluff to a whole new literal level. I must say that the recent letters have made the review page more interesting than the actual story. As for the collar. I'm sure it's just an invention of the aurthor and is only a formality. A slave collar is usally attacked to a chain or a leash or something. Remember this is only Fanfiction. The author is not JRR Tolkien. and cannot be held to the same level as that literary genus. Just be glad she didn't throw in an abbomination otherwise known as a Marry Sue. People are not perfect and I think she portrays the merits and flaws of the charaters personalitys very well. One more thing do try and remember that this is Adult fanfiction.net. If you want something safe go read the kiddy section on Fanfiction.net.

Sinserily
Nessa Ar-Fieneil (Marry Sue slayer)

Thanks for getting Rumil out of that camp. Now we have to wait and see if they get safely into the forest. Interesting booboo with the braid. Seems only sensible to me to keep the hair out of the way of weapons and fires. Hopefully Celeborn has better things to do than to punish Legolas some more.

Yes, a lot of questions... Especially since I read the whole story again the other day. And then it hit me that Legolas still has to pay back to Glorfindel. I had almost forgotten about that...Perhaps he could make a trip to Lothlorien at the time for the Mid-Summer Festival? I always thought a little Celeborn/Legolas/Glorfindel should be interesting... Oh well, I'll bet you have your own plans though. ;)

Well I was 99% sure you wouldn't, but I wanted to make it 100%! :) *Grins* You share the same opinions as me! Yay!

*Sobs* Poor Rumil! I'm glad he's (nearly) safe but it looks like a long recovery for him too! *Sniffles and sends another hat*

So, not all the Courtesans hide their identity, then? Seldayan obviously doesn't, if he's around his family! Which is nice, I think. :)

Lovely chapter, looking forward to seeing these men taught a lesson and the recovery begin! Hope Legolas doesn't get punished for braiding his hair either - I think he's more than redeemed himself!

Tux

Woohoo! New chapter! Thank you so much. I really needed this.

Is Legolas STILL wearing that braid? Heavens. That's evil of you. Making him run around with his hair braided, for all of Lorien to see... *grins* ;)

I hope Legolas manages to rescue Rumil so Haldir and Celeborn will not be so angry with him. We are waiting to find out the nasty men's goal in this attack or how they plan to accomplish it. Legolas and Seldayan are pretty funny together. More story please.